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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The Lord is my guide In him I confide Never choosing a side He is my rock In which I place stock Holding the key to the lock He is my light All through the night Never dim, always bright He is my salvation From worldly humiliation No further contemplation He is my rainbow On which spirits flow Basking in the glow The Lord is my dream Futile as it seems We are the winning team Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
We are the winning team" Yes, YOU ARE.. This is pure faith, Jennifer What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Your faith is so strong and you have described it well here. Thank you! ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Amen LW ~ A winning team for sure. Beautiful read. Bonnie |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I loved the simplicity of the words that you used to describe such simple truths... He is all that and more. God Bless You, Bob <>< |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kathleen . . . Thank you my friend. I know I can lean on Him if I need to. ellie . . . You are welcome. Just write what is in my heart. Bonnie . . . I second that. Thanks. Bob . . . Indeed he is my friend. His love shall conquer all. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully powerful and positive LoneWolf ... beautiful thoughts! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words..and so true.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Your faith is admirable! In a world where so many Christians are so out of faith that they try to prove God scientifically, it is quite a relief to read a poem like yours. Thankyou very much for sharing. |
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gidget7 Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 52Arkansas, USA |
I love it !! One part stood out to me as a beautiful sight and feeling... He is my rainbow On which spirits flow Basking in the glow What a wonderful thought to carry. God bless you. |
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