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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-12-04 09:09 PM


November wind on my naked face
Bringing shivers down my spine
And a quickening of  pace
Marks the begining of winter
when the snow will soon fall
A beautiful white covering
that will soon cover us all
Hiding the grey of the land
In a blanket of snow
to keep it protected and safe
till spring lets it go
Enjoy the beauty all around
That is God's grace
A Monet in white
upon a startled face
So listen for the song
of a November wind
A song in the color of grey
heralding winter to begin


© Copyright 2000 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-12-05 06:27 AM


This is a very beautiful poem, "a Monet in white", That line, among many of theselovely lines, is exquisite poetry. ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
2 posted 2000-12-05 08:24 AM


This is like reading a painting Suzanne ~ Simply beautiful.  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2000-12-05 02:42 PM


  Thank you for stepping back and looking at a distance at the beauty a new snow can truly bring.  Like with a Monet, one needs to step back and view the art at a distance to step into the true beauty his masterpiece has to offer.  God Bless You, Bob <><
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
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4 posted 2000-12-10 01:28 PM


This is really beautiful! Leaves one with such a wonderful picture and feeling.  

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


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