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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-11-08 11:46 PM



When your down,
And have a frown
remember there is someone
with a crown that can bring you
around that's Jesus,
He's the one to depend on
The one to make you smile,
The one who will walk a mile
Just to carry you through,
When your lost,
Don't know your way,
Jesus is there with the light
To guide you all the way.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-11-09 03:36 AM


Thank God for Jesus
He's always there,
Our joy and our sorrows to share,
Oh such marvelous care--
Thank God, so much for Jesus!

Thank you for your lovely poem,  David


WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-11-09 04:35 AM


Bless you Rose for sharing this lovely poem, Jesus is always there to give us all we need. Love Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2000-11-10 01:42 PM


This is really good. Great rhyme with your poetic pen!
Deb

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
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4 posted 2000-11-14 08:41 AM


And what a beautiful light it is Rosebud... lovely poem.  Bonnie
WhtDove
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5 posted 2000-11-18 10:01 PM


Even though I'm late in reading it, it couldn't have come at a more perfect time, and have been more fitting. Thanks!
compassion
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since 2000-11-01
Posts 135
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6 posted 2000-11-19 05:03 PM


Wonderful, wonderful!!

My dear grandma would have danced a gig around this poem as I sit with a hugh smile across my face enjoying your wonderful praise to Jesus! Oh, my, Amen!  

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-11-19 05:05 PM


RoseBud~
Such lovely thoughts to sing in His name.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-12-03 10:47 PM


Thank you all so much, Jesus is the light, and he helps me each and every step I take, when I'm in doubt which way to turn, I know with him I often yearn, because of love that he shows me.
anonymous albert ?
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9 posted 2001-08-01 01:59 AM


...and i pray he will...lovely pice...God bless.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
10 posted 2001-08-02 08:26 PM


Your poem flows so nicely... rolled right off of my tongue into my spirit.  -Bob
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