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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-10-31 03:25 PM




~OCEAN OF LOVE SENRYU~

5-7-5


I am the ocean
of God's love everlasting
my waves cleanse your soul

*By Melissa Honeybee*


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-10-31 03:57 PM


Perfect simplicity Melissa!!!

and each crashing wave
is an outpouring of hope
from our loving Lord


Bonnie

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-31 06:15 PM


To the distant shores
I cast the words of glory
Praise be with my Lord

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-10-31 09:40 PM


Melissa~
Dear little poet ...
Your faith shines so brightly in this offering.
Lovely.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-10-31 11:35 PM


I stand on the shore
Waves splashing over my feet
Calming rough waters


Welcome Melissa, good job. Marcy

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2000-11-01 05:21 AM


Melissa,
  This is a wonderful, still picture of the loveliness of God's ongoing Love & sea of forgetfulness in forgiveness.  Well done.
                        David


WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-11-01 07:24 AM


Melissa,
  What a sweet serene reminder of the love of God, engulfing us in His ocean of Love. I like this!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2000-11-27 12:47 PM



Melissa-
  this is so beautiful..
  perfectly penned, and filled
  with a quiet faith...

  hugs,
  ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
8 posted 2000-11-27 02:30 AM


Melissa; So few beautiful words and so much Love that He has to give us. Beautiful!  Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
9 posted 2000-11-27 11:37 AM


So very beautiful. Loved it.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
10 posted 2000-11-27 04:50 PM


God's Love is just like that...           Bob <><
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