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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
On a brilliant fall afternoon, The gorge was aflame with color, That will be fading all too soon. People had come from near and far, To see this glorious sight, Nature in all her splendor, Showed a kalidescope of light. My words could not do justice, To this beauty You have shown, With majestic trees standing proudly, As if guarding Your heavenly throne. I could see Your touch in the water, With its rapids rushing along, As it cascaded over the brim, I could hear the angel's song. Seagulls appeared as soaring doves, Spiraling through the sky, And from the delicate mist that rose, Rainbows caught my eye. Looking beyond the great chasm, To the hills that framed this view, Pure white clouds formed a billowing robe, So clearly, that's when I saw You. Standing there with Your arms spread wide, On Your face a hint of a smile, Amazing the world with what You had done, Showing off Your flair and Your style. And once again You had helped me to see, What too often I tend to ignore, Leaving me filled with an inner peace, I will cherish forevermore. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Bonnie, You transcribed the scene perfect!! It sounds heavenly and majestic. Through your beautiful poem I could visual the scene. Thank you for sharing, Just beautiful!  What a awesome God we serve. What beauty He gives to us. Can't you just imagine what heaven will look like after viewing scene's like this? Beautiful write as I'm sure this brought a even greater "hint of a smile" to His beautiful face. Marcy "Pure white clouds formed a billowing robe, So clearly, that's when I saw You. Standing there with Your arms spread wide, On Your face a hint of a smile, Amazing the world with what You had done, Showing off Your flair and Your style." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bonnie; This so Majestic in style and word! He is a show-off! Just look at all the wonder everywhere! You made this scene come alive and I so enjoyed the view. love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Bonnie! WOW! Denise |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
You're a master of perfect adjectives and similes, vividly capturing God's beauty via flowing, dancing poetic lines, Bonnie. How I love it. Thank you. Rae |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is among the lovliest poems I have had the pleasure to read and I am putting it in my personal library so I may reflect back on it's beauty many times. You paint the gifts of God so wonderfully in this piece. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ This is remarkably lovely. Such vividity. I've been to the waterfalls and I can see them again through your verse. How majestic ! What praise to His name. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Like standing before the waterfall, I stare in gaze and awe at this fine expression of your words... You have made this moment come to life. Amazingly, Beautifully, Brilliant... I Loved it! Bob <>< |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Bonnie, This is wonderful! Beautiful beyond words. I can picture the waterfall and hear the angels sing with the rush of water. How awesome the vision! Deb |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie you always seem to render me speechless, or just repeating myself. I will echo all the above. For you do have a gift to sing his praise and bring the beauty of any scene across to the reader. EXCELLENT! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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