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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
The clouds cloud up the grassy field Making all happiness disapear Animals scream in pain as the day has come While humans cry in vain No smile is found at any corners The time has come the angels scream The Devil only laughs God looks down with a fretful look and says Have no fear no children I told you he time was near For all the people to be judged And yes I will be fair The people smile as the devil crys God just sits and laughs The roads dry up and the birds sing For no one else is crying Every last person is laughing Everyone knows it will be ok Because they are in God's hands Hey This is me and my work so I hpoe you like it??? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME!! I sure like how this one turned around in the end.  God is the winning team for sure.I hope you'll enjoy it here, and feel free to read and respond to others as well. If there's anything I can help you with at anytime, feel free to give me an email or contact me by icq. Great poem! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and the most uplifting forum there is. Wonderful happiness abounding from this one. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
~*~ Great job on this one. Steph! You really are a good poet. Keep up the great work, and keep ur head to the sky, we got no time to let the bad things drag us down! Luv Ya, Priscilla< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hello and Welcome to Passions! This is a very interesting piece you have here. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Deb |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
W E L C O M E I like how evil with a "d" (devil) gets his in the end... and how We will all be happy living with God. A very good poem. Bob <>< |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome to the family on this forum. Can we even begin to conceive the awesomeness of being with our Lord eternally? I like your poem and hope to see more. Thanks, Rae |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I have to agree with Bob on this one, gotta love it when the devil gets his!!! Welcome, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Bonnie |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Okay ppl thanx 4 replying to my poem but you probably won't see anymore of my work at this forum because I usually don't write stuff like this. This one just kind avcame to me but if you want to see another poem they are all located in the teen forum 3! Thanx again!!! I live in the present but yearn for the past... yet the future is so very near |
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