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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
This was actually written several years ago while I was attending a christian college in tennessee. On campus was a small garden called the, 'garden of prayer'. it was beautiful, and it inspired this poem. hope you like it. ![]() ____________________________________________ joyous music fills the air- a bird joins in the song a flower grows- a tree stands tall- a chipmunk scurries past love travels in on butterfly wings to dry the tear from my eye 'tis peaceful here in this garden of prayer- all worries are cast aside and when i return to the world outside my burdens i'll carry no more for my Father will take them from me i have only to let them go. -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sounds like a beautiful place vl, and you have written well of it. And a great message too...if only I'd remember - to just let them go!!!! Thanks for this, Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Vicky~ This is so pretty and brings about a feeling of peace and serenity. I've visited those special gardens and have yet to not feel the calm overtake me. Isn't it nice that someone thinks to set aside these lovely outings for our minds and spirits to commune. Beautiful, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You've described it's beauty well! It leaves you that serene, peaceful feeling! I truly enjoyed this this morning! All you are really leaving me in a peaceful mood this day! Thank you! Welcome to Spiritual too ![]() <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
bonnie- yes, it was a very beautiful place, and so peaceful. it just seemed so easy to let it all go when i was there. thanks so much for the response. ![]() marge- 'peace and serenity' are the perfect words to describe this garden. i often think about it, and wish i was close enough to visit it again. thanks so much for reading. glad you like it. ![]() bob- so glad you enjoyed this. yes, this is a very tranquil place...definitely filled with God's presence. ![]() WhtDove- thank you so much for the kind words. you've helped to make my day a happy one too. really glad you enjoyed this. thanks for the welcome. ![]() LOVE YOU ALL, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Vicky, A place of peace and quiet contemplation, communing with nature about you, what a wonderful place to talk to God. Reading this poem left me with a serene calm, and a soul smile. Bless you for sharing this! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Vicki, It certainly shows in this poem that you found the senerity and peace you sought. It leaves me with a defining calm and peace. Sweet, sweet loving poem to Jesus. ![]() Glad you shared that part of you and the Bible College, that was a dream of mine at that age. Marcy |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
I enjoyed the poem very, very much. It was a beautiful place to design the beautiful poem you wrote. This is my first reply in the spiritual forum. Roger |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wonderful serenity in the garden, and you penned it so well. Deb ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- thanks so much for the kind words. ![]() so glad this left you feeling calm and serene. ![]() God bless you, my friend. ![]() Marcy- yes...the college and the garden in particular, was a wonderful place. so glad you enjoyed this. ![]() thanks for the sweet reply. ![]() Roger- i am truly honored that you chose this as your first poem to reply to here. ![]() really glad you enjoyed this. ![]() Deb- yes...i LOVED this garden, and really miss it sometimes. ![]() so glad you enjoyed. ![]() hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Beautiful. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
![]() ...and it is OK to return time and time again. [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dragonpoe- thanks so much...glad you enjoyed. ![]() Bob- yes...it is a wonderful place to be. ![]() thanks for the kind words... ![]() hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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