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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
if you can hear me give me wings and time to breathe and a man who sings like an angel with dark brown eyes and a tidal embrace that never dies like every lover's promises and soft touches and eyes that accept blushes if you are watching send me an angel who will sew himself to my side a man who doesn't know how to say goodbye... |
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douglasbailey Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27Palmerston North, New Zealand |
I LOVE THIS - I think this is so great that it's worth stealing. May I please have permission to use this to show my friend how I feel about her? - I'll just change the man to woman. and I'll stick by Jannie May at the bottom (credit where it's due). I wanted to write her a poem today - and you've written it and I'm not sure how I could do better to expalin to her what she is to me. |
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Alexander Duke Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 12 |
if you are watching send me an angel who will sew himself to my side a man who doesn't know how to say goodbye... Beautiful Lines |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear jennie; WELCOME! What an entrance! Your poem is so romantic, "a man who doesn't know how to say goodbye"! I love this. Put to music, it would make a great country western song. Can't wait to see more poetry from you. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jennie May, what a lovely way to come into Spiritual...we are all looking forward to many more lovely pieces from you. Welcome to Passions! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Spiritual Jennie! This is a tender piece, and I great enjoyed reading it! I love the last stanza  I hope we are able to enjoy more from you! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your subtle request... I hope that he hears and answers. Angels are so hard to find.Bob <>< |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Welcome jennie - What a beautiful poem. I agree with Ellie, this would make a great song. Look forward to reading more of your work. Bonnie |
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Michele Antoinette New Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 5 |
A beautiful poem, - tidal embrace ... sew.... great imagery, Thanks Jenny |
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