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On Angel Wings (revised) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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This is written for my husband's cousin and her daughter who died suddenly three years ago three months apart. With a note of thanks for all the help I received on this from you kind folks here. And a note of thanks to WhtDove for her challenge a while back! (I made a lot of changes and wanted to post it in this forum, hope that's ok?) This is dedicated in loving memory of Patty and Jaime Since lifted high on angel wings Of gossamer and lace I've seen so many wondrous things And seen Him face to face. Enraptured by the King of Kings Wrapped up in His embrace My soul eternally it sings Of His amazing grace. When you arrive and see the King The beauty in His face You'll find the end of suffering All pain He will erase. When lifted high on angel wings Of gossamer and lace You'll see so many splendor'd things And wonders of His grace. Once reunited in this place Of lacy angel wings We'll be together by His grace As all of heaven sings. ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Yes, this is heavenly, Denise- and reminds me of a poem I wrote, of a similar situation, which I will post shortly--Well done,friend! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This piece is a blessing to all who read it, especially anyone who has ever lost someone close. Michael |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I loved this each time I read it Denise... I'm sure Jaime and Patty are singing songs in Heaven for your dedication. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you all so much! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise is it ok? I'm honored! Sorry I haven't been around before this, but I'm sure you understand! Beautifully written! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Denise, this is a wonderul tribute and of course an excellent response to WhtDove's challenge! So beautiful, and a nice flow in the read! Great job. Thank you for posting! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Rebecca and Echo for your lovely comments! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful dedication that I know your friends will always hold close to their hearts, for they are angels as you are! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Denise, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Denise this is lovely. I just found it. It came at an anniversary of the loss of my young husband at 41. He died on the 4th of July. Not in an accident as so many do. But he just died unexpectedly. Your poetry soothes. Love, Joyce |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
My spirit is humming with awe...beautifully done Denise! The comfort you have received shines in this testament of grace! |
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