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ROSE MARY Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 82scranton,pa. u.s.a |
CONNECT THE DOTS I know I am a body made up of many dots connected to my Lord Jesus Christ and as each one follows the others I see the purpose and plan for my life The Lord holds the Holy pen that flows with crimson red ink and he connects my dots one by one so that like Him I'll always think Sometimes I try to move a dot and the chain of command is broke my burdens become heavier until I feel like I will choke But once I drag my dot back to the straight line it belongs in only then can I feel God's presence removing the heaviness of my sin As simple as a child's game connecting one dot to the other why is it so hard for us to understand tell me my sisters and brothers Why do we look out on a sunny day and still see darkened skies why do we lose our focus and forget about the honesty before the lie If all the choices we would make were played like that simple game each dot of choice would be in sequence and life for us would never be the same So like a child lets believe that each dot should stay together and from that childlike faith know that God will remain with us forever Then next time we face a trail depression or sheer lonileness lets connect the dots on God's pathway and put all our troubles to rest written by rose mary (c)6/11/2000 [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is an outstanding piece of poetry. Original, unique and worth reading. Congratulations! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Rose, I liked the theme, "connect the dots". Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry of truth. Marcy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"childlike faith..." yes, some things shouldn't be questioned. Well done! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Hey Rose, I just wanted to say that this poem is pretty descent. It kind of starts out slow, to me. But you ended it strong and I love the correlation between connecting the dots to childlike faith. Pretty descent work here. Jfreak |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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