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Who's Gonna Love You ?
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Who's Gonna Love You ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Who's Gonna Love You ? ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Who's gonna love you long after I'm gone? Who's gonna hold you and sing you this song? Who's gonna be sorry that I've left this town? Who's gonna love you when you're feeling down? You'll still want my loving long after I'm gone. Just who's gonna love you when the blues comes along? When you're alone singing the blues in the night, who's gonna love you till you get it right? You're gonna miss me, long after I'm gone. You're gonna want me to sing you this song. You're gonna reach for me in the night. But, who's gonna love you and hold you so tight? I won't be here to love you, for I'll be long gone. So, baby, who's gonna love you when the blues comes along? ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very musical, Marge! I can just hear the music playing in my head as I read this one! Good job!  ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Thank you ! ! ! That's just the way it came to me ... singing the blues ! Thank you, thank you, thank you ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, Very lovely poem Marge, sing us a song! Denise, you wouldn't believe her voice. It's beautiful. Elizabeth |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I hope there's a sax playing here cause I can hear one.. HUGS ------------------ Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl - You got it ! Yes, yes, yes ... just wailing the blues out in the night. Thank you, gal. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Definitely a song here Marge. Think Ron can add some sound to this forum? We all would make quite a choir. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
If he wanted to make my night ... that would be a great delight ! Thanks for the great idea ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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