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jcthaman
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since 1999-11-27
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0 posted 1999-12-01 09:13 PM


I look at you and your beauty leaves me breathless,
I pray to God to make our friendship deathless.
then it occurs to me that what we have is more than friendship,
when i see myself in dreams kissing your lips.

you are beautiful, intelligent, and kind,
when i'm with you i lose track of the time,
your touch overloads my mind,
another like you i'll probably never find,

But when i'm with you, i don't know what to say,
and my shyness i regret all day,
you seem perfect for me in every single way.

i've never felt the way i do with you,
and i wonder if you feel the same way too.
although fear of rejection makes this hard to do,
i've written this poem to say that "i love you."

Jeremy Carey


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Jewl_24_1999
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1 posted 1999-12-01 09:32 PM


I bet your pretty great yourself. and so is this poem!
jcthaman
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2 posted 1999-12-02 03:18 PM


hehe, thanx. i am just beginning to write poetry and i wrote this for someone, but haven't given her it yet.
Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-02 07:37 PM


Lovely sentiments, Jeremy! Give it to her! She'll love it!

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Denise


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4 posted 1999-12-02 07:41 PM


Great thoughts, Jeremy.
Now share them with her.


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