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Open Poetry #4

Declaration of Love

jcthaman
Junior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 22
Hershey, PA, USA

0 posted 1999-12-01 09:13 PM

I look at you and your beauty leaves me breathless,
I pray to God to make our friendship deathless.
then it occurs to me that what we have is more than friendship,
when i see myself in dreams kissing your lips.

you are beautiful, intelligent, and kind,
when i'm with you i lose track of the time,
your touch overloads my mind,
another like you i'll probably never find,

But when i'm with you, i don't know what to say,
and my shyness i regret all day,
you seem perfect for me in every single way.

i've never felt the way i do with you,
and i wonder if you feel the same way too.
although fear of rejection makes this hard to do,
i've written this poem to say that "i love you."

Jeremy Carey

Jewl_24_1999
Member

since 1999-10-24

Posts 64
USA

1 posted 1999-12-01 09:32 PM

I bet your pretty great yourself. and so is this poem!

jcthaman
Junior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 22
Hershey, PA, USA

2 posted 1999-12-02 03:18 PM

hehe, thanx. i am just beginning to write poetry and i wrote this for someone, but haven't given her it yet.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-02 07:37 PM

Lovely sentiments, Jeremy! Give it to her! She'll love it!

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Denise

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 1999-12-02 07:41 PM

Great thoughts, Jeremy.
Now share them with her.

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