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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wandering about with time on my hands, Just molding castles in the sand. Who I am and hope to be, The answer lives inside of me. I dream of where I once did roam, Of happy times and home sweet home. And as I smile on the past, I think of the one that did not last. You touched my world as it spun around. But then you left without a sound. I guess you never really knew, This heart I gave from me to you. I was the one with the very sad eyes. As the emptiness caught me by surprise. My heart like a puzzle was waiting to be solved. Not wanting to ever again be involved. But then one day a message was sent my way. And I finally put that sad mask away. As the moon cast its light upon the scenes, I was once again filled with brand new dreams. [This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely poem, Eloise. Very beautifully done! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
How could we survive without dreams? I enjoyed this while I did a little dreaming of my own. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful writing Eloise, very touching. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Denise, Ohme, and Severn. I appreciate you reading and taking time to reply. I'm fairly new to Passions, but everyone here has made me feel very welcome. |
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