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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-27 06:23 PM


The day you went away,
My heart broke into two
And I cry every night,
Scream aloud,
Wish upon the stars,
Wishing you were here holding me tight,
Why did you go?
Have I hurt you,
Souldn't have said the things to you,
Soory IF I did ,
Your leaving makes my heart cry for you,
Why did you leave?
You should have left a
note of goodbye,
I would have understand why you had to leave?

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Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
1 posted 1999-11-27 07:17 PM


A very emotional poem I sense the hurt. Welcome to the site.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

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