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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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I own a castle on the beach it really is quite grand. It has every thing I need except its built with sand. I used to place importance on the little things I had. But now I own a castle..so, I must not be doing bad. The view is quite outstanding and the ocean so serene. I own a beach front kingdom and I'm the only queen. The money here is plentiful. Sand dollars all around. No visits to the sand bank you can find it on the ground. I'm gonna spend my life here its the perfect place to be. You'll always know just where I am. In my castle by the sea. ------------------ Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What more could one need, I ask?! Excellent, Lucie, my sentiments exactly!  ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like this. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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cates Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 15 |
Yes, Luci that sure is grand |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nice one Lucie. I enjoyed. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have the right to live your way Yes, even in a castle And anyone who says you don't Must be a real a....... I've missed you, Lucie! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Who the heck are you!?!?!? I'm not sure we've met before, but I really liked this poem of yours - you little disappearing brat!  So now I know where you've been hiding out - probably kidnapped some poor "prince" to hold hostage in there with ya, huh? Well, gees Louise, I'm not even sure what to say to you !! It's been so long since we've talked! Just a minute, I have to sit down, I still can't believe I'm seeing this post with your name on it....hang on.....I'm feeling faint.....  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lucie! Where have you been? To the sea? Well it's time to get back here and get writing! I loved this....what a great attitude to have...I would love to live in a castle like yours by the sea....(not sure if my ISP will take sand dollars though!)... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucie - I like your sand castle. It just sounds lovely ... I'd like to come and visit your kingdom by the sea. I hope that there are sand dollars lying about ... but I worry what you do when the tide's coming IN and then going OUT. Will you castle stand the ravages of the tide? I sure hope that it's true so you can there abide. It just dawned on me, I had a thought so remote ... why of course it will stand, you surrounded it with a moat ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Would you like some company? |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sounds like a great place to me....Welcome back Lucie..you were missed!...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds beautiful, Lucie! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Lucieeeeee - I'm hoooooome!!!! Open the gates - Lemme in!! I LOVE this one, Luce..... |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Is there a room for me too! from the the responses I'm reading, I hope there's plently of them. Nice work! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love this, Lucie! Welcome back! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I sure do love Lucie's style She writes a verse with hidden smile For in the rhyme I think I felt She knew our hearts would surely melt And though I've not been introduced Your poem seem to have produced Some open arms awaiting you By those who love your poetry too Wonerful poem Elizabeth |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Sorry I haven't been around lately y'all.. been cleaning the sand out of my crack..hahahhahahah .. kisses and hugs to all.. missed you!!! |
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