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Where is the meadow lark?
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Where is the meadow lark? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where is the meadow lark? Face the wind to know the day And hear the sounds that come. Watch the sun how meadows stay, And follow its succumb. Mind the wind it speaks to you. Know the sounds it tell. Watch the lacy meadows flow, And you will hear it well. Hark the meadow lark, a key Mark it well where it lay. Know the song is given free And leads you on your way. I wonder here in time delay My own Eden garden And pray each night it ever stay. Solace of my pardon. Your pardon lays within your hand. And reached by anyone Follow the trill to meadow land, And there will shine the sun. So listen to the wind and mark, The singing of the meadow lark. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
quote: You just keep getting better and better and better, Sy.....   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Too much in here not to like, and like well. Thank you, Dear Sir. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, your meadow lark! What a trill! cute kiss, Nan! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Beautiful song! ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - I know I heard the meadowlark, singing in this rhyme. So shrill, the trill ... sung for all time. You cannot hide, little meadowlark ... upon your song I find, a melody, sung sweetly to me of another place, another time. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Just like the Whispering Rain you wrote The meadow lark sings out to me So sweet a voice and music fine Exquisite peaceful melody And I can only now repeat The very words, the same refrain This poem deserves exactly what I wrote at end of Whispering Rain Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I answer you with the trill of a thrill. Thank you my dear. *L* Sunshine, Dear sir thanks you much *L* Denise, Your pun is well taken *L* Ohme, Thank you my dear. Mike, Your enjoy is my enjoy. Marge, You are quite the poet in case you did'nt know it. Loved your poem. Elizabeth, Your quite the fencer and I'm touched Touche And that jam you sent went a long long way. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Serene and so nicely done Seymour! |
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