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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-11-27 11:39 AM


You captured my heart
So exquistley
From the beginning
In such a way
I knew I would be
Forever entranced
With you I shall be
Together inside just you and me
Always with God in his hands
I do believe
With you I am happy
With you I am free
Smiling always
I feel whole and complete
Happier than I could ever be
You mean the world the stars and beyond to me
With your gentle care
I am truly aware
We are Forever embraced in a little prayer
With you and God
This triangle I do share

This is a sequel to another of mine....titled "The One"
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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 11-27-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-27 12:03 PM


This is beautiful, Justbleu. Very lovely!

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Denise


lostboy
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2 posted 1999-11-27 01:54 PM


This is really nice. It put a huge smile on my face and I need that today (I'm working!)
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 1999-11-27 03:31 PM


I'm glad I was able to put a smile on your face Lostboy!!

Thanks soo much Denise, as always!!

Bridgette

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-11-28 12:42 PM


Justbleu: I love "We are Forever embraced in a little prayer"...

HUGS



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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...

danni
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5 posted 1999-11-28 02:01 PM


Beautiful poem. It must be incredible to be able to feel that way.
WhtDove
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6 posted 1999-11-28 02:04 PM


Justbleu this was wonderful. What a triangle to be in. God at the top you can't go wrong!

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Severn
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7 posted 1999-11-28 05:50 PM


Nice to see you here again - and a beautiful poem too.
K

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
8 posted 1999-11-30 11:11 PM


It can be an incredible feeling!!
Yep, I'm here again, I haven't been cuz, I moved to Oregon!! I miss home a lot though!!! But, oh well!!

Thanks everybody, I'm glad you like this!!

Bridgette

This place is sooo much fun!!!
I do like posting my poetry, but it is very cool to be able to read others poetry!!

Nan
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9 posted 1999-12-01 07:24 AM


Keep smiling, Bridgette - Nice job..
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