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Three Simple Words |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Screams of silence into the night Vaporize and disappear. Only three words I wabt you -- I need you, to hear. All will be turmoil until "I need you," lands upon your ear. Then your response which echoes Back softly, I don't want to hear. The heart-wrenching "No" shall only Bring forth a tear. And so I condemn my heart To a life of torturous fear, All due to three simple words I need you to hear... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sadly touching poem. Very well expressed! Welcomd to Passions! (check typo of 'want' in 3rd line) ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
 Sad but wll done. Glad to have you------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Beri: So sad and it's a rotten feeling when you can't speak the language of your heart.. Big hugs to you ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Thank you all for the welcomes. Thanks rainbow for the hugs, much welcomed by me. :-) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Totally agree with RainbowGirl on this one... It really sucks to not be able to say all you need to, especially when the other is clearly not ready to hear it, say anything to know what to do with it if they did. Sad, and well written at that  ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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