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only want what you havent got
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only want what you havent got |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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ive heard people say that, the things you want most, are the things you can never have, is that true in your mind? jsut becuase you know, regardless that ill love you forever, will it make it that much easier to walk away? just becuase ive promised, to give you as much time as you need, to find yourself and your needs, does it mean that youll give your time to someone else? just becuase you know, that ill build my entire life with you, is that any reason, to postpone filling the promises youve made? just becuase you know i dont need anyone else, does it give you the security to think, that no one else will ever need me, so your positon is eternal? just becuase the newness is gone, and our relationship has grown, does that give you the right, to want to turn back time? you know that you have me, so is the saying true, would you want to love me more, if i didnt love you? |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Love your poem Love your poem. Love your poem. Need I say more? ------------------ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
with a pasionate heart such as yours, only one so blind couldn't see it. Loved your words here Amber. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Amber, with lots of great questions!  ------------------ Denise |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
questions i often ask of myself and of my love. thank you all so much i appreciate your understanding and enthusiasm for my poetry it means more than you know. |
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