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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
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Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-11-26 10:40 PM


This feeling is so unusual.
To know she feels for me as I feel for her.

This feeling of love.

Knowing my heart has been mended,
With the purest of golden silk.

This feeling of fullness.

Knowing I have one to share,
My pashions with, one to be with.

This feeling of life.

KNowing I have someone who,
Will keep the blade from my torn wrist.

This feeling of her.

I will cherish forevermore.

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 1999-11-27 01:59 AM


Love it. Short and succint

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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-27 02:06 AM


Sounds like things are going well for you and your friend. I'm glad to hear it! Your poem is absolutely beautiful!

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Denise


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-11-27 11:35 AM


It's great to know things are going well for you. You did a good job of putting your feelings into this poem.
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
4 posted 1999-11-27 11:42 AM


Innocence here, but also a darker edge...Love we cannot live without...


Corinne

cates
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since 1999-11-27
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5 posted 1999-11-27 05:59 PM


I share those words also, thanks
Bathory
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since 1999-11-20
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OH.
6 posted 1999-11-28 06:24 PM


Tom I love you so much I want to thank you for freeing my sadness and pain.
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
7 posted 1999-11-28 09:03 PM


The feeling of love is an unusual feeling!

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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!


suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
8 posted 1999-11-29 08:31 PM


Yes this feling is unusual to me since its the first time one has loved me back.

Hey Kristi dont worry I keep the sadness and pain away forr eternity and we both know well live that long
for a vampyre never dies

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life is short kill quick

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