Open Poetry #4 |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
This feeling is so unusual. To know she feels for me as I feel for her. This feeling of love. Knowing my heart has been mended, With the purest of golden silk. This feeling of fullness. Knowing I have one to share, My pashions with, one to be with. This feeling of life. KNowing I have someone who, Will keep the blade from my torn wrist. This feeling of her. I will cherish forevermore. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Love it. Short and succint ------------------ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like things are going well for you and your friend. I'm glad to hear it! Your poem is absolutely beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's great to know things are going well for you. You did a good job of putting your feelings into this poem. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Innocence here, but also a darker edge...Love we cannot live without... Corinne |
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cates Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 15 |
I share those words also, thanks |
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Bathory Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 11OH. |
Tom I love you so much I want to thank you for freeing my sadness and pain. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
The feeling of love is an unusual feeling! ------------------ Lorene Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday! |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Yes this feling is unusual to me since its the first time one has loved me back. Hey Kristi dont worry I keep the sadness and pain away forr eternity and we both know well live that long for a vampyre never dies ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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