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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 1999-11-28 06:59 PM


Bubbles Bubbles, I've Got Troubles!

Bubbles, bubbles, I've got troubles!
I just spilled my bubble stuff
I was in here to be napping
Mommy's going to make a fuss!

Now my troubles just got doubled!
I just spilled my paint water
All over Mommy's brand new carpet
I will hear some words from her!

Now I am in big, big trouble
Sneaking out to get a drink
I spilled milk on Daddy's briefcase
Troubles worser than you think!

Accidents get you in trouble
Trouble is my middle name
I spilled Mommy's brand new perfume
She will never be the same!

Back to my bedroom on the double
To continue with my nap
I tripped up and broke a lamp
She will not be pleased with that!

I cleaned everything right up
And jumped back into bed
I heard Mommy's footsteps coming
Quickly covered up my head!

Mommy walked into my bedroom
Not a single word she said
She sat down beside me and then
Kissed me gently on the head

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 1999 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-28 07:04 PM


Ahhhhh.....this is so precious, Elizabeth!! I love it!

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Denise


Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 1999-11-28 07:16 PM


Denise, I'm sure you would enjoy any poems for children. Glad you liked it!
Elizabeth

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-11-28 10:59 PM


Elizabeth,
Your output is a water fall
The read of which does enthrall.

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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4 posted 1999-11-29 07:38 AM


Cute. Reminds me of my children.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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5 posted 1999-11-29 08:10 AM


I too am a big fan of the poetry you write for Cassandra, Elizabeth....!
They are all so delightful to read..!
This one is too cute....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 11-29-1999).]

suthern
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6 posted 1999-11-29 10:46 AM


Delightful!
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 1999-11-29 11:40 AM


Bubbles, bubbles! I've got troubles!
I just heard my bubble burst!
I've spilled lots of bubble stuff
But this is even more than worse
At a loss for words to say
How all of you have made my day
Your seeing through a child's eyes
Has brought me joy I can't disguise
But saying this is not enough
It's better yet than bubble stuff!

Elizabeth

Nan
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8 posted 1999-11-29 07:07 PM


ROTFLMAO - Methinks you've met my Cassandra!!!!
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 1999-11-29 07:16 PM


No, but I saw her picture, and that was enough, She's adorable!
Incidently, your swans swim mighty fast!
Elizabeth

Nan
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10 posted 1999-11-29 08:26 PM


You're right about the swans - they just don't move like that in "real time" - I wonder who made that graphic anyway.....
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