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Laura
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 26

0 posted 1999-11-26 01:37 PM

perhaps one day i'll tell you,
of the love i have inside.
the fellings will come bursting out,
and then no more can i hide.

but what will you say? what will you do?
that is what troubles me so.
you could walk away or worse yet- do nothing at all,
and leave me feeling low.

or you could act somewhat in favor of me,
and say," i like you as a friend."
i will settle for that but it won't work that way,
and our so called "friendship" will end.

i wouldn't be able to take,
the ridicule of aiming so hi,
when i, myself, am so low.
it's time to decide- i've made up my mind,
perhaps one day i'll tell you,
but for now- You'll Never Know.

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Laura

[This message has been edited by Laura (edited 12-02-1999).]

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 1999-11-26 07:30 PM

For a while I thought I wrote this LoL, I have felt the same thing many of times! All I can say is that if you arent positve you want to say anything, don't, wait till you are! Good job with this though, you expressed your feeling well on this!

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~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-26 10:02 PM

Laura..I do believe I read this one in the teen forum. You have expressed yourself well in this piece. I do want to let you know the multiple posting is frowned upon here. Choose which forum you would like to post a particular poem in. Thanks.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-11-27 04:28 AM

Excellent sentiment to this verse. I can identify with such reasoning.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

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