I once believed in the magic of love

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Open Poetry #4

I once believed in the magic of love

Ayla
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since 1999-08-31

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0 posted 1999-11-25 01:28 AM

I once believed in the magic of love.
That it was a gift from the heavens above.
I used to vision the two of us growing old together.
But now I understood that nothing is forever.
You have opened my eyes to the reality of life.
When you walked away with her the day you said goodbye.

I once believed in the magic of love.
That it was a gift from the heavens above.
But you took the magic away from me.
And now I dont believe that love is for eternity.

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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...

[This message has been edited by Ayla (edited 11-25-1999).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 1999-11-25 01:37 PM

Sad yet beautiful poem. Very touching.

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Denise

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 1999-11-25 02:15 PM

Damn! Why does love have to be this way?

I like the universal quality of this poem.

Corinne

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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3 posted 1999-11-25 03:46 PM

so sad

Isis
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since 1999-09-06

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Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-11-25 11:34 PM

I really enjoyed this Ayla and so sad

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Ayla
Member

since 1999-08-31

Posts 50

5 posted 1999-11-27 03:08 AM

Thanks dsnyder,corinne,hoot and Isis for your kind comments.

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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...

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