Open Poetry #4 |
Walking on Wind |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Childhood memories Umbrellas clutched In small hands Blustery, rainy day Stormy charcoal seas Mirror the sky Wet crust on sandy beach Siblings in a race Desperate to fly Heaven within reach Free, felt so free then No worries, no cares Just my brother and me Walking on the wind (c) 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
having lost many that weree once close, I was moved by this. Much loved Corinne, the last two lines brought a lump to my throat its the image that I picture. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, U K Hero. That is probably the nicest thing anyone has ever said about something I've written! Sorry though, to have reminded you of pain... Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
such fond memories |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ What sweet memories I found walking through the archives~ Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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