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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
The heart never listens to reason, Can't stop the changing of a season. The world outside lays frozen, 'Tis this path I have chosen. A path of pain and despair; I know you don't really care. I love you comes so easy to your lips My heart and soul that statement does grip. While you, with your sweet caress, Lead me into bitterness, I close my eyes and await the pain For my heart chose not to break your chain. ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Starith: Long time since I've seen you...I can't think of a title except excrutiatingly painful and I'm not sure that's a good title but does pain ever have a good one..  Well written HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Starith, I think I know this person! Kidding aside, what title jumped into your mind when you were writing it? That's usually what I go with...Now, the title that jumps out at me in reading it is: Frozen Nice to meet ya! Corinne |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Yes Rainbow it has been a while...it seems my muse took a vaction and left me to ponder the pain with no release. Thanks for the hugs they are always welcomed.  The pain I hope will soon fade.Corinne: Thanks for the suggestion. I often write pieces that have no titles, and none ever come to mind either. I have the talent for writing my emotions but it seems I lack the talent for naming them. ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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