Open Poetry #4 |
A Little Walk |
Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
A Little Walk Would you like to take a walk? The path is long not wide. But it could be a pleasant trip if we were side by side. Would you care to spend the time just learning how to live, finding out what we could have and what we have to give? I would like to take a walk right to eternity. But, if you can not go that far then please don't walk with me. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful expressions Ohme The walk through time of which you speak Seperates the strong from weak Many will walk when paths are clear Though in rough times, they will not dare But those who love us will abide And hand in hand walk by our side Dispite the wind, the snow the rain Until we find our way again ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
ARGH...the two of you are making it difficult on me ! ; ) I love them both ! : ) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ohme, Oh my, well done! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks Munda....I like it when a poem inspires me like that |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Kudos to the both of you! Well written and well inspired. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you for this little walk! Great poem! Yours too, Ruth! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Yes, Hoot. I like yours as well Thanks Munda. You help keep me trying harder Thank you Sunshine Thanks for the kudos, Andrew You're welcome, Denise ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked this poem very much. Nice sentiments here! |
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