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Mom...Who's Best?
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Mom...Who's Best? |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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I sat upon the shore one day And gazed upon my child at play I called to her ‘I love you best!’ To which she called to me in jest ‘Much better than the very best?’ ‘Ah yes!’ I said most graciously ‘You think…’ she queried patiently ‘my little sister is the worst?’ Saddened eyes, and lips tightly pursed ‘NO, my dear!’… ‘You’re my favorite first’  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How sweet, I love it !! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
I just love the semantical word-play used in this one Satiate. And I am amazed at how fast you wrote this one. Ain't it amazing what you can do when you don't over-analyze something?  Alicat, who just knows that he's going to Hell... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Indeed, so sweet, so lovely. : ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet! I love it! Great job, Satiate! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A first rate job, if I do say so myself!! |
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