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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Fences I gaze about the landscape of my mind and see open spaces letting my thoughts wander unhindered across hills of dreams and valleys of emotions without fences or posted warnings… the only fence remaining is the one upon which I sit. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another good one! How do you manage to say so much in so few words?! Amazing! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like this a lot.  ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
heheh Denise...my grandpa always said.. "tell everything you know and that makes the person you tell twice as smart as you. He then knows what he knows and knows what you know" So, my grandpa was a man of few words..yet when he spoke....it was deep. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I think your Grampa was a very smart man... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I would love to have your style in my reportoire, Robert, but I'd better stick to mine and leave this to an expert. Great work. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
and yours mine Balladeer.....but yes I will stick to mine. Robert Nan....I will post the poem I wrote for my grandpa's funeral next....tonight. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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