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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 1999-11-23 10:10 PM


It’s kind of hard for me to express the way I feel
I wish everybody would just stay real,
Cause they don’t know the deal
they don’t know dean for real
I wish people could just feel me
not rob me of my thoughts
damn people be ticking at me just like clocks
I wish it would rain so It could wash
away all this pain that haunts me each and everyday
I wish this pain wouldn’t stay
I wish that it would just go away
I know I ain’t perfect but I would like to try
unlike the rest of the world built on lies
I remember saying momma where’s daddy at
momma I hate it when look at me like that
it was something in her eyes that told me
daddy wasn’t coming home for a long time
little did me the son know that his dad almost died
I try to live my life day bye day and ignore the rest
but it’s scewed up cause I can feel life more then I can feel death
everything crazy sometime I wish my momma never made me
some people say D share your self with me
I say it’s just not that easy
if you want to experience something more then
just thoughts and talk
you have to walk my walk feel my thoughts
and you gota hit me in the right spot
so girls when you see dean in the halls walk
up to him and give a hug cause you know he ain’t a thug
all he wants is some true love.
Cause why waste the track
Deano's better then all of that
I think if anybody else was to feel my pain
they would go insane
sometimes I wonder how Iv maintained over the years
Iv seen people close to me shed many tears
this pain and sorrow I speak of is burnt in to my sole
I never knew my life would take this toll.
My pain is deep and will never leave my soul.
I need love I need to find that true white dove
from the beautiful stars above somebody that
can show me true love. I be like Simon and
mylow on a quest for true love
but is it to tuff. I will keep on trying to reunite
my soul with the other half that has been
missing for quite sometime I hope some day
it will fully be mine.

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"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-23 11:49 PM


Yep, life involves much pain. You have expressed it well in your poem. Welcome to Passions, Dean.

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Denise


Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-11-24 12:04 PM



Dean...A very expressing piece of work. I especially like the part that reads "I will keep on trying to
reunite my soul with the other half that has been missing for quite sometime. I hope some day it will fully be mine." Very good choice of words. Welcome to Passions.


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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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