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Feel My Pain
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Feel My Pain |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
It’s kind of hard for me to express the way I feel I wish everybody would just stay real, Cause they don’t know the deal they don’t know dean for real I wish people could just feel me not rob me of my thoughts damn people be ticking at me just like clocks I wish it would rain so It could wash away all this pain that haunts me each and everyday I wish this pain wouldn’t stay I wish that it would just go away I know I ain’t perfect but I would like to try unlike the rest of the world built on lies I remember saying momma where’s daddy at momma I hate it when look at me like that it was something in her eyes that told me daddy wasn’t coming home for a long time little did me the son know that his dad almost died I try to live my life day bye day and ignore the rest but it’s scewed up cause I can feel life more then I can feel death everything crazy sometime I wish my momma never made me some people say D share your self with me I say it’s just not that easy if you want to experience something more then just thoughts and talk you have to walk my walk feel my thoughts and you gota hit me in the right spot so girls when you see dean in the halls walk up to him and give a hug cause you know he ain’t a thug all he wants is some true love. Cause why waste the track Deano's better then all of that I think if anybody else was to feel my pain they would go insane sometimes I wonder how Iv maintained over the years Iv seen people close to me shed many tears this pain and sorrow I speak of is burnt in to my sole I never knew my life would take this toll. My pain is deep and will never leave my soul. I need love I need to find that true white dove from the beautiful stars above somebody that can show me true love. I be like Simon and mylow on a quest for true love but is it to tuff. I will keep on trying to reunite my soul with the other half that has been missing for quite sometime I hope some day it will fully be mine. ------------------ "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, life involves much pain. You have expressed it well in your poem. Welcome to Passions, Dean. ------------------ Denise |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Dean...A very expressing piece of work. I especially like the part that reads "I will keep on trying to reunite my soul with the other half that has been missing for quite sometime. I hope some day it will fully be mine." Very good choice of words. Welcome to Passions. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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