Open Poetry #4 |
The Hunter (A Poem for Sy) |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Posted by Virginia Scheffey, Elizabeth's sister-in-law. The Hunter The hunter left the hunter's nest In search of that of his unrest And wandered long and hard to find The wonderment of other mind But not to see for years and years The mind which in his mind appears Until perchance the prey he grace And look contentment in the face For mind and mind together sewn Together witnessing unknown Unknown to all, the hunter's find The wonderment of mind to mind Elizabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two souls, not lost, but sought, and found. Beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, What the hunter found The wonderment of mind to mind. So precious that it near to blind. Wondered long that mind to find, The wonderment of another mind. And the years passed, as you know And the wonderment did not sew. Until there came by chance of grace. Another time another place. And then the mind to mind did grow And when it did begin to sew. Blossomed the most fragile flower With mind to mind as its power. Sy |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, great poem Elizabeth and equally great reply, Sy. Beautifully done, both of you. Michael |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is truly beautiful writing and sentimant. I think I'm going to cry. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well done both of you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very well done, both of you! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This duet could play the palace! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
So beautiful to see the embracing of the minds and hearts. Elizabeth - You glow. Seymour - You reflect the glow. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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