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Alicat
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0 posted 1999-11-23 12:17 PM


Winds of Change scour
The Sands of Time
Creating shifting vistas
Transient habitations
Where reside whirling dervishes
And the haunts of memory's ebb
The present moment passes
Hiding all beneath the shifting
Sands of Time, still scoured
By the Winds of Change

Alicat
11-22-99

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 1999-11-24 05:09 PM


Interesting read, got me to thinking quite a bit about time... And me poor brain is all wore out from school, (Heh, yeah right.. LOL) Good piece, thanks for making me think a little.

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Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-24 08:35 PM


Excellent piece, Alicat! I enjoyed this one!

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Nan
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3 posted 1999-11-24 10:58 PM


You're right - Winds do scour sand.... I like it, persnikitty.
Ohme
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4 posted 1999-11-24 11:14 PM


Alicat, I think over time our perception can change. Can't change the facts but the way they are percieved can change. Loved this

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-24 11:46 PM


Your form is looking good...love the way you did this
Nicole
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6 posted 1999-11-25 11:51 AM



well done, sug...as always.

Munda
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7 posted 2000-03-05 08:49 AM


number 11
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