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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Winds of Change scour The Sands of Time Creating shifting vistas Transient habitations Where reside whirling dervishes And the haunts of memory's ebb The present moment passes Hiding all beneath the shifting Sands of Time, still scoured By the Winds of Change Alicat 11-22-99 |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Interesting read, got me to thinking quite a bit about time... And me poor brain is all wore out from school, (Heh, yeah right.. LOL) Good piece, thanks for making me think a little.  ------------------ "'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher" |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent piece, Alicat! I enjoyed this one! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're right - Winds do scour sand.... I like it, persnikitty.  |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Alicat, I think over time our perception can change. Can't change the facts but the way they are percieved can change. Loved this ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your form is looking good...love the way you did this |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
well done, sug...as always. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
number 11 |
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