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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-11-23 11:12 AM


Only your soles go to heaven.
I'm in trouble no doubt!
I've looked on every single pair,
mine are all worn out.

Everyone says I'm super nice,
what am I gonna do?
'Cause I'll never get to Heaven,
with all these worn out shoes!!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-11-23 11:13 AM


My soles are indeed holey....LOLOL...well versed.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-11-23 11:19 AM


ROFL Echo this was great! Mine are floppin and worn out that's for sure! giggle...
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-11-23 02:51 PM


RS...Thanks for reading!

Rebecca...PHEW, I am glad that it is not just me hehehehe

Glad you two liked it! Thanks for reading!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

4 posted 1999-11-23 04:00 PM


Nice one ER, I liked this alot.

From what I understand, the one's that go to Heaven must have been used.

Now if you lose it, that's where the problem arises.

So I think we're still in good shape.

-RS

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