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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-11-22 11:11 PM


The silence echoes loud tonight
Lies often hurt the most untold
of sin or self its all in spite
these circles long ago made old.

this story book that you have wrote
has warn itself down to the binding
our clouded castle stays afloat
only to bask in sunlight blinding.

Someday all is justified
a truth on which we both agree
but here and now you have lied
and haven’t said a word to me.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-11-22 11:28 PM


Oh, Kevin ... powerful.
The last two lines say so much.


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2 posted 1999-11-22 11:29 PM


i liked this poem so much ! silence can be so painful
Kevin
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3 posted 1999-11-22 11:34 PM


thank guys,

marge, the last two lines are my favorite as well, even though they hurt the most, its good to get it out

jm, i agree, i would prefer the most painful of words to silence

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4 posted 1999-11-23 01:56 AM


i feel like this is coming from my exboyfriend himself.

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-23 09:42 AM


BRAVO!!! Need I say more Kevin??
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6 posted 1999-11-23 04:33 PM


balladeer,

surely your work will always be far better than mine

but i treasure and respect your humble opinion thank you =)

Kevin
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7 posted 1999-11-23 04:41 PM


omg lol, dont ask me where hoot became balladeer somewhere down the line

but that was suppose to be for you hoot
and i hold the same regard for both your work and balladeers,

hehe how did that happen =)

sowwy

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