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Silence |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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The silence echoes loud tonight Lies often hurt the most untold of sin or self its all in spite these circles long ago made old. this story book that you have wrote has warn itself down to the binding our clouded castle stays afloat only to bask in sunlight blinding. Someday all is justified a truth on which we both agree but here and now you have lied and haven’t said a word to me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Kevin ... powerful. The last two lines say so much. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jenmarie Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 27 |
i liked this poem so much ! silence can be so painful |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thank guys, marge, the last two lines are my favorite as well, even though they hurt the most, its good to get it out jm, i agree, i would prefer the most painful of words to silence |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
i feel like this is coming from my exboyfriend himself. ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BRAVO!!! Need I say more Kevin?? |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
balladeer, surely your work will always be far better than mine but i treasure and respect your humble opinion thank you =) |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
omg lol, dont ask me where hoot became balladeer somewhere down the line but that was suppose to be for you hoot and i hold the same regard for both your work and balladeers, hehe how did that happen =) sowwy |
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