Open Poetry #4 |
The Icicle Winkens |
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The Icicle Winkens There was magic, that’s the clue to the remembrance I bring you to, the childhood memory, only some may share of when we were young, and without care. For during the early winter’s time there came a spirit of love in kind wrapped up in a Christmas festive, when little children become so restive. Now you, dear ‘Deer, need have no fear for your remembrances are sincere; and Pepper, to your amazed delight sugarplums will have danced that night… Sweet Nan of all the Cape Cod dreams magic to you is what it seems and Poet deVine, weaver of schemes you would also have sweet dreams. There are other poets who may be reading and you are named here in my thoughts for you share your gifts galore something that your magic brought. And I would be so sorely remiss if I did not include the Master in this; for there is only One away on high and the other Master, well, Ron is nigh… But I veer away from the truth intent of portraying my memory and sentiment. so when I read of Seymour’s debris I thought of all past Christmas trees. Now to a child, whose eyes are wide there is some mystical magic deep inside that comes and spreads over the evergreen and invades all sweet children’s dreams. But for me, the best magic of all is when silvered icicles are a’winking for you see it come back to you in a child’s eyes when they’re a’blinking. And soon amid the cluttered stream of opened hopes, and opened dreams and while the lights are still a’twinkin’ on the tree, the icicles are a’winkin’. Then as is wont, and needs to be done the revelry is over, and gone is the fun, the tree is down, on the curb at roadside but I still see the magic, it does not hide. For although the ornaments have been duly taken wrapped in tissue and again stored away there still remains on the tree, in sunlight blinking some remains of magic icicles, still a’winkin’. So to all Passions’ friends and residents here in Passion’s Forums, I wink in your New Year, and know that I pass on to you shining wishes Of Love and Humanity, so to you, hugs and kisses. 22 November, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-22-1999).] [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-22-1999).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
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Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And I and all the others send to you Hugs and kisses. Well done my friend. *L* |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Sy. You were the first one to break into the jingling season, and I'm sure these will not be our last attempts... |
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Martie
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Such a beautiful poem sunshine and sentiment. |
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Sunshine
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Martie, thanks for coming in - of all of this poem, I think I like the title best... |
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Mike Member Elite
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Enjoyed a bunch Sunshine. Well done. |
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Sunshine
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Thanks, Mike! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
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Hugs to you too Sunshine |
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Sunshine
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Hoot, may your holidays and your new year be filled with every dream... |
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Pepper Member Elite
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Wonderful Sunshine...I,too, send hugs and kisses..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Sunshine
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Coming right back at you, Pepper... |
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Kit McCallum
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I came across this in a search Karilea ... oh do promise you'll repost this next Christmas ... please? This is wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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