If I Tell You That I Love You

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Open Poetry #4

If I Tell You That I Love You

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-22 01:32 AM

If I tell you that I love you
Please don't run away
Take the time and listen
To all I have to say

This may seem a simple task
But you are still unknowing
Of all that I will ask

I will ask that you take comfort
In my open arms
They are meant to wrap around you
And keep you safe from harm

Just please return the favor
When you see that I'm in need
I will be sure to remember
Your unselfish deed

I will ask that you seek passion
In my loving kiss
And allow me to indulge
With unworldly bliss

I will ask that you be there for me
When I can take no more
I will do the same for you
Whenever you might need me to

I will ask that you allow me
To fill your life with joy
So long as you understand
That my love is not a toy

So if I tell you that I love you
And you should choose to stay
These are what I'll ask of you
Each and every day

Miss Abagail Mannering
Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

1 posted 1999-11-22 02:30 PM

erminds me of a poem i wrote while i was first being courted by my first beau... beautiful

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-11-24 02:52 PM

Tank you for your comment. This one's for the "beau" I have yet to find.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 1999-11-24 03:05 PM

This is lovely, danni... good luck!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-11-24 09:18 PM

This is lovely, Danni! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-11-24 09:22 PM

Truely beautiful Danni. And it doesn't seem like you're asking for much.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

6 posted 1999-11-25 02:00 AM

Thank you all. I suppose it doesn't sound like much, but somehow it always turns out to be to much.

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