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Forever Yours
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Forever Yours |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Forever Yours Your voice is the last I want to hear Before I fall asleep at night. Your touch is the first I want to feel When dawn brings morning light. Your lips are the ones I want to kiss From now until the end of time. Your hand is the one I want to hold Forever clasped in mine. So let me hear you say my name Let me feel your touch. Kiss my lips and hold my hand Forever’s not enough. **** This is a combined effort with Hoot. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Tara  And don't let her fool you guys, she did all the work |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Modesty does not become you, Ruth. You're the one who completed this work. If it weren't for you, it'd still be sitting unfinished. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is beautiful, both of you. A lot of heart came from somewhere in this poem, and a lot you both have  |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thank you from the bottom of BOTH our hearts. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Tara! You too, Ruth! So beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara - Very, very pretty. Hoot - I'll bet you think so too. What a nice co-op effort. It's very nice and sentimental. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks everyone...but she truly did all the work (had to get the last say in there ) |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks for the read, ladies! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A fine joint effort it is.... |
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sraet Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 31 |
Ahhh.......can I relate to this one! Congrats to both of you, excellent. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh! This is lovely!I missed it til it popped to the top. Love it! Elizabeth |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Tara and Hoot, Well Done both of you!! 'Tis truly beautiful ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful indeed.. ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
A BEAUTIFUL love song Tara... Sorry that I am late for the bandwagon...Back to the top my friend... |
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