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Just a Try ;* |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Eyes meet hearts race so sweet slow pace closer yet? back away? start to sweat should I stay? Go by feel moving in is this for real? will I win? I step closer you back away then come closer will you stay? Unsure feelings but feels so good hearts for stealing I think I should Closer yet I move to you lips are wet what should I do? only now a breath apart thinking how and if we'll start Feels so right but still unsure fate's taking flight all things a blur What the hell??  what can it hurt? I'll break the spell and grab her shirt... ...Pull her to me and light a fire then she will see what I desire Our lips now meet all things aside this feels so sweet at least I tried Will it be "right"? we'll see in time babe, please dont fright its just a "try"  ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwww ! I think she'll LOVE IT. Go for it, Thunder. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sweet Thunder |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Very sweet poem. After all, what can be gained if you never try? |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Marge... Thank you for your comment, not sure if this about anybody in particular yet, just the feeling that was on my mind when I wrote it Thank youHoot... Thank you danni... Thank you... how right you are my friend, how right you are. |
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