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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Brand Names Of Love ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Your love is the joy I feel when flipping through the 'Rolodex' of memories. Each event is captured like a 'Poloroid' moment. You are stored in the c:\Windows\of my mind. You are the 'Coca Cola' of refreshment. Indeed, you are 'The right one, baby !' You are my 'American Express'-ion... I wouldn't think of leaving home without you. You are 'two scoops of raisins' in the 'Kellogg's' of my mind. You are the 'Nike' of my spirit when I need a jump-start. You're the 'Cadillac' of class... when I need to be driven. The 'Energizer' of my life... you keep me going...and going...and going. It's therefore no surprise that I think of you as my 'Coffee Mate'. The first thing I wake up to each morning, and my 'Nytol' at night. No name tags needed here, but ... I think I 'Gotcha'. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Cute!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: Thanks for the smiles... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cute |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, please note that I am a Bulova lover! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
awwww...That was so Nutra Sweet. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is a 10 star poem********** I smiled all the way through |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Clever and cute! Love it! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Watcher666 - Thanks RainbowGirl - You're always welcome. Hoot - You too ! Balladeer - Not sure I should touch that one. I DO know their slogan ! You are sneaky ! RSEvans - Thank you ... you're 100% Pure Sugar. LostDreamer - And YOU are just precious to say that! Denise- I like that clever thang ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Clever clever clever! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Can't believe I missed this little gem In a "casual corner" of the forum This play on words she wrote so well It must have been Victoria's secret But Calvin was inKleined to tell He de"claires" that it's the "best" And "Annie sez" the very same thing But that's the "hallmark" of your style You know, Marge, you are quite a"macy"ing I like the "structure" of your verse There is no "gap" of cleverness You "express" the "target" of the p[oem With "limited" words but thoughtful jest Don't let this poet get away Back her up against "the wall" Let's tie her up from head to "foot Locker" up and throw the key But "sear"iously, you overwhelm You could be called the Wizzard of Oz Let's go down to old Pier One And have ourselves some Haagen Daas "Liz" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend. Love your humor. I'm running late. A true reply will have to wait. Thanks for loving this little gem, I love it your reply. ~Marge~ ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
CUTE ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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