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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-10 07:48 AM


Brand Names Of Love
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Your love is the joy I feel
when flipping through the 'Rolodex' of memories.

Each event is captured like a 'Poloroid' moment.

You are stored in the c:\Windows\of my mind.

You are the 'Coca Cola' of refreshment.
Indeed, you are 'The right one, baby !'

You are my 'American Express'-ion...
I wouldn't think of leaving home without you.

You are 'two scoops of raisins'
in the 'Kellogg's' of my mind.

You are the 'Nike' of my spirit
when I need a jump-start.

You're the 'Cadillac' of class...
when I need to be driven.

The 'Energizer' of my life...
you keep me going...and going...and going.

It's therefore no surprise
that I think of you as my 'Coffee Mate'.

The first thing I wake up to each morning,
and my 'Nytol' at night.

No name tags needed here, but ...
I think I 'Gotcha'.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-11-10 08:00 AM


Cute!

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RainbowGirl
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2 posted 1999-11-10 10:02 AM


Marge: Thanks for the smiles...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-11-10 12:25 PM


Cute
Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-11-10 02:35 PM


Marge, please note that I am a Bulova lover!
RSEvans
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5 posted 1999-11-10 02:39 PM


awwww...That was so Nutra Sweet.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 1999-12-01 10:41 PM


This is a 10 star poem**********
I smiled all the way through

Denise
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7 posted 1999-12-01 10:48 PM


Clever and cute! Love it!

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Denise


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 1999-12-02 12:32 PM


Watcher666 - Thanks

RainbowGirl - You're always welcome.

Hoot - You too !

Balladeer - Not sure I should touch that one.
I DO know their slogan ! You are sneaky !

RSEvans -
Thank you ... you're 100% Pure Sugar.

LostDreamer - And YOU are just precious to say that!

Denise- I like that clever thang !

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Severn
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9 posted 1999-12-02 06:56 AM


Clever clever clever!
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 1999-12-02 08:24 AM


Can't believe I missed this little gem

In a "casual corner" of the forum
This play on words she wrote so well
It must have been Victoria's secret
But Calvin was inKleined to tell

He de"claires" that it's the "best"
And "Annie sez" the very same thing
But that's the "hallmark" of your style
You know, Marge, you are quite a"macy"ing

I like the "structure" of your verse
There is no "gap" of cleverness
You "express" the "target" of the p[oem
With "limited" words but thoughtful jest

Don't let this poet get away
Back her up against "the wall"
Let's tie her up from head to "foot
Locker" up and throw the key

But "sear"iously, you overwhelm
You could be called the Wizzard of Oz
Let's go down to old Pier One
And have ourselves some Haagen Daas

"Liz"

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 1999-12-02 08:27 AM


Elizabeth, my friend.
Love your humor.
I'm running late.
A true reply
will have to wait.

Thanks for loving this little gem,
I love it your reply. ~Marge~


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Lynn
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12 posted 1999-12-02 09:50 AM



CUTE

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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