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Twilight_Angel
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 22
USA

0 posted 1999-11-20 04:49 PM



Where is my voice when I need to talk?
Where are my feet when I need to walk?
Where are my hands when I need to touch?
Where is your love when I need it so much?

© Copyright 1999 Twilight_Angel - All Rights Reserved
Erynn Griffin
Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States
1 posted 1999-11-20 05:00 PM


I loved it...
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 1999-11-24 03:59 PM


Simple, but nice!
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 1999-11-26 11:08 PM


Sounds like you're standing there frozen, and a little lost - - I've certainly been there myself! Like time is standing still or something, and your lost in your own thoughts....very nice little ditty.

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


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