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Adam's Eve |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Adam's Eve ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Loving you is the best love I have ever known. The years of knowing that we were growing in love all along. It never occurred to me to look beyond your love. You were and are the moon, the stars, the Heaven's above. I always hope we'll be in love this much for all time. Me giving my all for you ... you joining hands with mine. We are just the best of the best. You're the Adam of this Eve. The only difference is you're the one who tempts me. You tempt me with delight, I'd eat your apples anytime. And when you least expect it, I'd offer you a bite of mine. No penalties for taking just one bite, Adam and Eve together what a delight. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
This is sweet! Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done gal.... There was little left to imagination, In the Garden of Eden. Adam and Eve were nekkid, Which was convenient for constant breedin'. Then Eve started wearin' fig leaves, Poor Adam was outta luck, So he headed on down to Walmart, And bought a case of Roundup. This worked for awhile, Adam could still have his way, Then Eve invented, The migraine headache! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Watcher ... nice to have you watching. Toe ... Nekkid is good ! Not tonight, dear ... unless you've got a 'weed wacker' ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Marge....LOL...(not to be confused with Talley wacker?..).....(I can hear LongJohn now, "Honey, let me show ya my caterpiller!) [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-10-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Marge..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great job, Marge... you sound like a happy, lucky lady. *S* And ROFLMAO @ Toerag... *G* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Toe, you are just too much sometimes....LOL |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL at weed whacker!! Nice going, Marge. Toe, you are one bad apple! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This was a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing a glimse of your wonderful love with us. |
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