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Beri
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since 1999-11-25
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0 posted 1999-12-01 10:12 PM


Sometimes when I try hard enough
I can remember feeling your arms around me
I can remember your kisses being showered on me
I remember how much you cared
But that's only when I think really hard
Now that all feels like it was just a dream
Because as each day goes so quickly by
My memory of your love fades more and more
All I am left seeing is you standing with her
You are by her side, not mine
I can see your arms around her
I can see you showering her with your kisses
I see how much you seem to care about her
All these things you once had with me
Have you forgotten already?
Do you no longer care?
This is what you have left me believing --
That you've forgotten and just don't care
At least, it seems you've forgotten about me
You don't care about me anymore
But not her...
You'll never forget her
You care for her
You love her
Because of her, I will never experience you again.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-01 10:21 PM


Very sad
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-01 10:40 PM


Heartbreaking Expressed very well.

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Denise


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