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Soul to Soul the Lovers Met
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Soul to Soul the Lovers Met |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Soul to Soul the Lovers Met Two lovers of the purest love Of that which sings the gentle dove Of that which winter breezes blow Soft icy whispers in the snow An ocean of a great divide Attempting storm and furious tide With churning cresting waves to hide Her lover on the other side His soul in its allotted space In distant and forbidden place Through visions of the spirit's grace She looked upon her lover's face Her timid soul then love confessed In quiet darkness it undressed And lay awaiting his caress His gentle hand upon its flesh No wicked wind or albatross Could so create a lover's loss No sorrow could the beast beget As soul to soul the lovers met Impassioned spirits intertwined And kissed the kiss, and sipped the wine On purest love the spirits dined Until the end of timeless time Elizabeth Santos 11/20/99 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This brought a tear to my eye and a very very heavy sigh. I wish I could explain the why. Exquisite. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth ... so lovely. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth. ------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, The why of why is just a sigh Of moments missed and clouded sky A poem as this was not conceived But spun of truth that I believed Elizabeth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge and Denise, two hearts full of love reading my poem of love. Who could want for more? Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, Spun of truth that you believe spun of truth that you conceive So why of why if not a sigh, Must be something in my eye. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I simply don't believe you cry It must be something in your eye A grain of sandy beach did fly And stirred around the watered eye Elizabeth |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh so beautiful Elizabeth. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Martie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, A grain of sand did fly my eye? True that could make me cry. But I'd rather the latter vie. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Truth has beauty Truth has grace When it looks you In the face From the truth You cannot run Nor can a dishrag Hide the sun Elizabeth |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Elizabeth, this brought tears to my eyes for a more obvious reason. Ruth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ruth, Sy is the poet's poet You are the passion of poetry Hope we meet soon. I'll try to find a shorter route between us and I'll bring Denise along . Elizabeth |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A beautiful poem indeed Elizabeth.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is one of the most gorgeous love poems I've ever read!  And, it doesn't surprise me that a gentle poet like yourself could pull it off so flawlessly!This is a keeper! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I seem to be feeling this tonight.  Lovely, this. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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