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debbiemac Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 19Lodi, CA USA |
He told her "I love you," but she was not his He has another at home, wondering tonight where he is. He's out with her again He's laughing, she's crying After fifteen years, she's given up on him He's living, she's dying They say everything happens for a reason And time heals all wounds But heartaches seem forever And heartaches don't heal that soon. ------------------ Copyright 1999 Debbie McGranahan [This message has been edited by debbiemac (edited 11-21-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So sad Debbie  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very well written, Debbie. A much-to-frequent event that breaks the hearts of many. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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debbiemac Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 19Lodi, CA USA |
Thank you Marge and hoot_owl_rn. I very much appreciate what one has to say. I try and write just what I'm feeling at the time so you'll probably notice somewhat of a variation with each submission. ------------------ Debbie |
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