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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-11-18 07:50 PM


Like an evening star,
Shinning brightly through me,
When you look into my eyes,
So deep in love,
I know we have something,
To share this love,
I found love in you and me,
Trusting where love'll be,
Surrender you,
My heart and soul,
Tell that you know,
What you see me through,
I feel my heart is in love,
When you see me through,
I feel my heart is in love,
When you make me smile,
And gave me that kind of look,
For your love,Its out of control,
You're the one
Who makes my love go crazy,
Who makes my heart go crazy,

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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
1 posted 1999-11-18 10:59 PM


this reminds me of somthing i would write..i liked it a lot!

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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-11-18 11:54 PM



I Liked this a lot. Great Poem!

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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