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It Finally Happened!
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It Finally Happened! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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With simple words on a computer screen An identity formed, grew, in my mind I became fond of a man, sight unseen And was thrilled at finding a friend so kind Getting to know him was easy enough Our friendship developed, grew, in my mind Yet the thought of love, my heart did rebuff As hundreds of miles' restriction confined The days passed me by, and in each of them I did look for him in some form or way All while up against those who would condemn In their minds, he just seemed too far away And the day did come, and my heart gave in Distance notwithstanding, I found my love Realization rang with an awful din There was no respite I could conceive of sigh I ponder those days that have come gone and passed us by. there were trials and tears Months were cast like the leaves off autumn's trees it was summer then A hand's fingers reach up to touch the smile upon my face my fingers And I muse now, how little I smiled how few received that gift from my heart.. until you Until you, my soul came to me surpassing the distance in miles in me.. This smile an unseen gift as you lay sleeping beside me. Together we've been for a few weeks now Truly, it seems so much longer than that I have to thank Passions, cause that's how I came to love and be with my Alicat.  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
That is so great Satiate. I'm happy for your happiness - and Alicat's. This is a truly lovely poem to express your joy. K |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well spoken and good for you. Reading this made me feel good too. Thanks |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for this lovely story! It's wonderful! I'm so happy for you and Alicat.. that you've found each other and are now together! Congratulations!  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So glad for the both of you -CONGRATS ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, how wonderful! I wish you both the best! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful to hear of a happy ending....or is that beginning? Best of all to you both ( I have it on good authority that Alicat is really a decent guy!) |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
I am stunned...not often has the written word evoked such strong emotion...strong enough to cause awe-struck tears of sheer joy to escape my sight-wearied eyes. Thank you all for your kind and heart-felt messages (and yes, she is reading this on the sly) and I find myself loving her all the more each passing moment. She is truly a treasure, buried deep and now found.Alicat the deeply smitten |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is wonderful....posting something for you two now |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad for both of you... may your happiness continue and grow. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
How wonderful! You've got this romantic heart a flutter....I'm happy for the both of you Lovely poem Satiate.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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