Open Poetry #4 |
A Piece Of Cake |
U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
A piece of cake! I ache For many a new baked cake My loins an oven My desire a mixture Of lust and love, A baker a blender I tamper with emotion To cook all my reasoning, In confusion I trifle! Is it love I wake each morning Or lust I ache to smell Some say Mmmmm… Weigh the spice And savoir, Then a seasoning tonight, I add a pinchly desire The menu Mistress or wife! I’m cooked; Goosed oven, two cakes at door! U K Hero |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh dear... Love the poem... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh my...you know playing around those stoves can get you burned...LOL Love this little work of yours! ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And if you get caught ... Hot Cross Buns ! Liked it. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Beware the good barkeep's daughter, Serving generous food and drink. There's none more seductive than she, Her delicacies come with a wink. Come the night she will find you, Soft and warm, with a come hither look. No telling the passions you'll flame, What cauldron you might stir and cook. So if you are bespoken, as I, Love for another in your heart. Do as I did, avert your stare, And with the falling sun depart. UK: You prepared a fine dish for us all to taste. Thanks for the treat. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Neither mistress nor wife have I, its just a poem, Andrew thats a very good poem is it yours? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great poem UK and I think the cook has stirred up some symbolism that smells pretty good. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Hero, very neat poem. I enjoyed it. But be careful, Hot, burn! ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
That it is UK. I wrote it about six months ago, but never posted it. Thou I have a wife this too is written from a purely fictional point of view with a background that involves FRP and a bard character I play. Ya, I know more detail than ya needed... but there it is. Thanks for askin' |
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