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Falling Snow |
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nindy8 New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 2 |
Like the soft, quiet sound of falling snow on the frozen world late at night, Is my breaths, so deep because of your love. Like the stillness of the night sky and the cold crisp air, Is my heart when you gently caress me with your love. Like the smell of the fresh fallen cystals of rain, Is my love, frozen for you, for all time. Like the wild, and refreshing wind, Is my mind, always free and wondering to be with you. Like the clear moonlight in the wonderful darkness of beautiful nights, Is my passion for your touch. Like the masterpiece that God has created for us to encompass, Is you, the love of my life, that I devour every moment that I breathe. Like the soft, quiet sound of falling snow on the frozen world at night, Is my love for you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this..lovely imagery here!  |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
lot of effort here, loved ...Like the soft, quiet sound of falling snow on the frozen world late at night, |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I too like your opening line...very pretty picture it paints. Welcome to Passions  ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful Imagery! Welcome to our Passion's Family! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Nindy, welcome to Passions! ------------------ Denise |
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nindy8 New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 2 |
I want to thank everyone for their wonderful replies. This is the first time I have ever posted one on the internet or anywhere for that matter. I will be spending some time reading up on others poems. This is a great site! Thanks again for the warm welcome! Melinda |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful poem nindy...Hee! Hee! I guess poetry is also genetic like art! Welcome to passions! Great first time poem! |
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