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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Black Hole On the event horizon like a shadow in a singularity hovering just beyond our reach, revolves a coequal being depleted of density now apprehended in the zero volume of an ineffective opinion. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Am I catching this right? Or am I just thinking to much? "Coequal" = spouse "being depleted of density" = slowly lacking matter (importance) "now apprehended in the zero volume" "of an ineffective opinion" = no longer being listened too A relationship that has fallen into a Black Hole. Robert... you know how I dislike having to think... you must stop this fine writing of yours... my brain can't take much more stimulation...  |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Andrew, Andrew, Andrew.....ahem....Dear Sir, I write them....the reader must interpret them!!!! hehehehehehe Robert (the constant thinker) ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
OH! I see where this is going! I give you the low down on the coin toss and you just leave me hangin'. Alright Mr. B, if this is the way you're going to play than.... than... than, I'm right!.... Ya that's it! I'm right... I'm right... I'm right.... and you're... you're just a big meannie for not telling me I'm right and making me think. I'm going to leave now and pout in the corner for a while. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
OK - so I'm still thinking! I won't venture my interpretation, Robert, suffice to say it follows closely with Mr Scotts! I like. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Alright Robert I'm with Andrew on this one! This one flew by me and I read it a few times. Though gotta give Andrew some credit there, that was a good interpretation!!! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
ok Andrew....I will let you be right..... this time! I told one girl a while back "Hey I write 'em you figure 'em out!" sleep well..... :-} ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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