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Closer to the ground...
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Closer to the ground... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
if i fall down and dont get up will that mean ive had enough or perhaps i like it better closer to the ground.. a solitary wrinkle does fall upon me adds much to the ugly underneath where mother nature allows me to be released.. ------------------ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Better to be on the ground than "in" the ground. Interesting last set of lines... not quite sure where you're headed with it, but it has me thinking. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Intiguing...you have me thinking about what those last lines may mean.... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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