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Deb Lynne
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 180
Where blue skies meet blue ocean

0 posted 1999-11-17 11:32 AM


My gut feeling tells me different
Than the lies you say to my face
My instinct knows just where you are
When you sneak off to another place

My eyes see the all the tell-tell signs
You keep trying so hard to hide
My body knows there's someone else
When you're lying by my side

My imagination isn't playing dirty tricks
It's not hard to see the reality
Of how you think I don't really see
Just what you're doing to me

My heart knows there's someone else
Who holds the key to your heart
For when you gave her all your love
You silently ripped mine apart

© Copyright 1999 Deb Lynne - All Rights Reserved
FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

1 posted 1999-11-17 11:49 AM


Very Strong

My body knows there's someone else
When you're lying by my side

His Loss

Nice piece

-RS


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RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
2 posted 1999-11-17 11:55 AM


What is this guy...Stupid? Thoughts expressed as feelings are seldom wrong. Hope this is not your situation.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
3 posted 1999-11-17 12:13 PM


Deb, this is a very sad poem. Hope that is not the way you are feeling!



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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

Deb Lynne
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 180
Where blue skies meet blue ocean
4 posted 1999-11-17 01:15 PM


Have no fear! All is well at home & in my heart! Just pulling out old memories and blowing off the dust!!!
Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-11-17 02:52 PM


Powerful writing, Deb. I'm glad those days are behind you!
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