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The heart knows.....
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The heart knows..... |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean 
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My gut feeling tells me different Than the lies you say to my face My instinct knows just where you are When you sneak off to another place My eyes see the all the tell-tell signs You keep trying so hard to hide My body knows there's someone else When you're lying by my side My imagination isn't playing dirty tricks It's not hard to see the reality Of how you think I don't really see Just what you're doing to me My heart knows there's someone else Who holds the key to your heart For when you gave her all your love You silently ripped mine apart |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Very Strong My body knows there's someone else When you're lying by my side His Loss Nice piece -RS ------------------ |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
What is this guy...Stupid? Thoughts expressed as feelings are seldom wrong. Hope this is not your situation. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Deb, this is a very sad poem.  Hope that is not the way you are feeling!------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Have no fear! All is well at home & in my heart! Just pulling out old memories and blowing off the dust!!! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Powerful writing, Deb. I'm glad those days are behind you! |
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